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[CE] Fire dance in the ancient temple by FeithLAuthor [CE] Fire dance in the ancient temple by FeithLAuthor
This is my entry for :iconvolenocontest:

Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart  PLEASE HELP ME TO WIN the POPULAR VOTING  BY VOTING ME AT THIS POOL voleno.deviantart.com/journal/… I was working on this piece for 2 weeks THANK YOU!Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart 

I enjoyed playing with fire and light effects as well as the view angle , it was quite difficult but I like the result.

 
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DancesJT Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Very nice!
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FeithLAuthor Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much ^^ 
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Voleno Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Thanks again for entering the VolenoContest! I'm currently responding to each entry, so forgive me if the analysis is a bit shallow on this first go around. 

Love the angle! The background and trailing effects definitely add a lot to the piece as well! :>

If you'd be interested in hearing a more detailed opinion of the piece, just let me know and we can talk about it at length. So again, you have my gratitude for participating and I hope to see you in future contests as well!
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Also, in case you haven't read yet, (and I know I've put it just about everywhere by now...) there will be a "popular vote" prize of $50 awarded to one more entry through a series of polls. Everyone is entered automatically, but if you'd rather yours wasn't, let me know and I can take it out of the running. Thank you!
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FeithLAuthor Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Please, I would like hearing more about your opinion. 

I would like to keep improving, in order to participate in other contest.
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Voleno Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Almost a month away exactly. o.o

Sorry about the wait. There are a few minor things I can think of to point out, one being that I love that the motion of the piece is uniform in the direction that she's twirling. Another is that I like that you incorporated a fitting sort of area, even if it's a top down view and would be a detail some would choose to ignore.

In terms of improvements, the suggestions are a bit more minor here. I feel like her eyes could be pointed a bit more upwards to look more like they're locking eyes with the viewer. They're slightly off from doing that, even though her face is turned upwards technically looking at us. And to get real nitpicky, the part where her sleeve is open in the triangle, I think a part of her arm would be showing there, just by how her spinning would place the sleeve.

I think actually overall, the arms look a bit off in that it's unclear exactly where they connect to her shoulders. Part of that is the design's fault, but looking at where her collarbone is, that should be one of the placement marks of where the shoulders should be, and it feels like they're a lot further back and wider. 

Of course, I see on this analysis that just about all I could really find wrong was minor stuff, so overall, I still say you did a great job and that this is a great entry. 
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FeithLAuthor Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the recommendations. I'll work on my art from this point of view ;)
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ronggo Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is even better! good work!
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FeithLAuthor Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Rongoo do you mind to vote for this piece in this poll please
voleno.deviantart.com/journal/… ?
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ronggo Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hey ! :) np, i think I did vote when the journal was published, feel free to vote mine too :)
voleno.deviantart.com/journal/…   it's the 3rd image from the top i think
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FeithLAuthor Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
It's amazing I thought it' was 3D modeled!!!
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ronggo Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ahahaha thx :D, perhaps because I use only soft airbrush for shading XD
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FeithLAuthor Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ummm... I'll have to update my technique in drawings the level of this contest was too high for me u.u
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ronggo Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hahaha well I was just trying out my luck lol, I think its a matter of taste from the contest jury? your drawing style and skill is already awesome! more importantly, we had fun and express our emotion with our artwork :) of course there's always room for improvement for all of us, learning never ends :)  . I choose soft airbrush just because I like it, not because it's right or wrong (I can imagine I do a lot of wrong things according to "art students" lol )
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FeithLAuthor Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Yap I according to you it's  the taste of the jury, I feel he was more emotional than anatomic or technical. But I don't want to argue... It's enough pressure to get the votes for passing the rounds to add one more problem XD. 

In special in this work I liked working with fire and the extra hours I take to select the right light zones.  Besides the work of choosing a correct context/backgroun that allow me to use right color to contrast. 

In addition, there will be always a difference between academic artist and self-educated artist. I think the first have mre contraints at the time but have more contacts (I mean teachers...) to be successfull. 
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FeithLAuthor Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^^
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